Massive Aggressive

Note to self: Save this as a draft. Not ready for prime time yet! Perhaps it’ll make a post someday. It’s a good start, just needs to be a bit longer. Which direction should it go? Tantalizing possibilities here. Perhaps a bit too positive. Make it more edgy. Better use caution. Goal: 42 more verses. And a chorus. Don’t forget LSD.

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Ain’t nobody gonna push me around
My feet are planted and my fists are coming down
If you ever try to penetrate this zone
I’ll put in you a bag and send your body home

6 responses

  1. Please tell me you’re Getting Charo as a backup singer when this piece is completed.

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    1. You think big. I like that. I may pay you homage in verse two.

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    1. Isn’t that how all of the truly great lyrics get written?

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  2. Well it ain’t exactly tailgates and tanlines but your lyrics have a certain deadly charm.

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    1. Tailgates? Yeah, I can see that. I do need a place to store my truck nuts. But tanlines? Somehow that’s a subject I always neglect in my lyrics. I shall redouble my efforts. Unless the lines are on my red neck?

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